Prototype
Introduction:
Hello everyone! My name is Tishka (I won't indicate my real name), nice to meet you. For a very long time, I didn't dare to write my stories on this site (I found out about this site not long ago), and I just told them to my (now former) friends, but after I saw my stories signed with my name and the names of "my friends," and even written incorrectly or altered, I decided to write the original. I'm writing for the first time, so don't judge too harshly, okay?
Thank you all very much in advance!!
PROTOTYPE (Original)
Elena opened her eyes. She was tied up by her hands and feet and was lying in a car.
It was night outside. A man got out of the car and called someone. He spoke for about 5 minutes, then got back into the car and drove off.— Who are you? Where am I? What are you going to do with me?
— I'm going to sell you to a very famous person. You will become his slave in every sense. And if I were you, I would submit to him, because your life will depend on this man. No one will look for you. I've already taken care of that. So be obedient and nothing bad will happen to you. I've warned you in advance, and you'll soon learn all the specifics.
The girl was terrified. She didn't know what to do: submit or resist to the last. Soon they arrived at a huge castle. Elena was amazed. It was so quiet and beautiful here. Everything was in greenery and flowers, the house was made of gold and other precious materials, the tiles were made of marble. The castle was magnificent. Elena thought, "What could happen to me in such a beautiful place?"
The man got out of the car and, opening the door, dragged the girl behind him into the palace.
— Good evening, señor, welcome to Tuapse. We are glad to see you, do you need anything? — said a hunchbacked man dressed in rags with long gray hair. His eyes were cold and evil. They were glassy like a snake's, no wonder he was nicknamed Snake.
— Snake, I've brought a slave for your Master. Order her to be tidied up, it will be a surprise for your Ruler.
— Yes, he should return at midnight, I think we'll manage by that time.
Then three beautiful slaves came and led Elena away. They bathed her, applied a special hair cream, tidied up her hair, gave her a manicure and pedicure, did her makeup, dressed her beautifully in a soft blue dress with an open décolleté under which she wore nothing. They brought her silver shoes, and now our princess was ready for the meeting.
It was about 9. Elena waited another hour. She very carefully sat on the edge of the bed. The bedspread was made of silk. The girl lay down and fell into a sweet sleep.
Meanwhile, midnight was approaching. And that meant only one thing, soon she would see him... so a few more hours passed, which seemed like minutes to Elena. She lay and slept. The moon shone on her. And suddenly a sharp shadow. And this cold. Elena got very scared and opened her eyes. She saw something resembling a man, but his muscles and body were a bit "tougher" than those of ordinary people. A man of athletic build. She couldn't see his face.
— Who are you? — the man asked the girl. It was such a pleasant, gentle voice speaking to her through the darkness.
— My name is Elena.
— What are you doing here? I was told that I should become your slave in every sense and they brought me here.
— A slave who sleeps in my place, very interesting — the guy said sarcastically.
— I... just — the girl got off the bed and ended up sitting on the floor. She lowered her head and just sat without saying anything. After sitting a bit longer, the guy left the room, leaving the girl sitting alone on the floor. Half an hour later, the guy returned. They were both silent.
— Sit on the sofa — the guy said just as gently. The girl immediately jumped up and fulfilled his request or rather his order. She didn't understand and was afraid to ask him. It was as if he was reading her thoughts. She constantly felt his gaze on her and was so uncomfortable. The guy approached her and sat down next to her.
— Help yourself, you must be hungry after all this time on the road? — the stranger said caringly.
— Thank you — they started eating. He only drank wine and watched her intently as if afraid to lose sight of her.
— Ask
— What?
— Well, you want to ask me something, right?
— How did you guess?
— It's visible in your eyes. You're nervous.
— Aren't you hungry?
— No. But you eat up. You need strength.
— For what? What will you do with me? — the girl asked with tears in her eyes. It was visible how worried and scared she was.
— You're shaking all over. He hugged her by the shoulders. He was so cold. Pleasant light turned on. Now she could see his face.
A handsome blond with dark blue eyes.
— What is your name?
— My name is Alex
The girl couldn't take her eyes off him.
"He's so handsome" — she kept thinking.
— Am I your slave now, yes?
— Yes, but I'm not a tyrant. And I'm not going to torment you. I'm not like everyone else. I will only punish you for a reason, and I'm not obliged to report to you. You must call me: Master, Lord, or ruler as you wish. Do you understand me?
— Yes... Lord
— That's a good girl. Are you full?
— Yes, Lord
— Then undress. I want to look at your body.
Elena was ashamed that she was humiliating herself like this in front of a complete stranger, but she wanted to do it for him. Could it be that I've fallen in love — she thought. The girl slowly stood up and reached her hand to her shoulder... tears appeared in her eyes... no matter how much she didn't want it... he's a stranger, and she's a slave.
— I... I can't, forgive me please, I'm too weak — the girl started crying and fell to her knees before Alex. He stood up and, lifting the girl, took off her dress himself, which like silk fell to Elena's feet in a second. He carefully examined her from head to toe...
— You have a very beautiful body.
He picked her up and laid her on the bed.
— Today I'm kind. Go to sleep. From now on and forever, you will sleep with me naked. Tomorrow evening there will be no such indulgence, rest and don't think about it for now. Tomorrow you'll have the whole day to think about it, and at night I'll return and we'll continue...
— Thank you very much, Lord — the girl said through tears. Alex kissed her on the forehead and left without saying goodbye to the girl...
Author's e-mail: Helen-Tishka@yandex.ru